YellowReaver
GENDER : Male POST COUNT : 469
REPUTATION : 6
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Age/Name: 'Reaver', 20
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 | | Subject: A relatively small contribution Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:52 pm | |
| In a sall Delta outpost, lies a lab. In it, began the "Samsara" experiments.  Ferox Gallade, project "Deva"  Ferox Shedinja, project "Asura"  Ferox Fearow (I chuckled at that), project "Karma" | |
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Terra
POST COUNT : 193
REPUTATION : 2
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| | Subject: Re: A relatively small contribution Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:32 am | |
| 1) I think the gallade needs more color variations: can you add more shades of grey to the points where the normal gallade is green?
2) The Shedinja dprite is fine
3) The blue crest of the fearow looks strange to me, but overall it's fine.
In any case, good work V_v | |
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